from “Pittman Forge” by David Brooks

Most of Pittman Forge was closed and dark, with only a scattering of street lights working. Even Annie’s was dark, though it was only a little after 8 p.m. He wandered into the center of town and was attracted to the glow and noise that emanated from the small Piggly Wiggly supermarket, still open, its parking lot half-full of people and cars. Standing at the edge of the light he saw that there were two separate groups: a few adults holding fat brown grocery bags doing their shopping, entering and exiting slowly from the store; and a small crowd of younger people collected at the far edge of the lot because there was nowhere else to go. The young crowd was centered on a trio of two men and a teenaged girl; the men wearing camouflage jackets and jeans and combat boots, the girl in a black tube top and bare feet. He could hear a few words of their conversation but not enough to follow it; at one point the woman began to laugh, a loud scream with her head thrown back, and she staggered about— whether from drunkenness or hilarity he couldn’t tell— slapping both camouflaged men on their shoulders. The rest of the teenagers became more animated at this performance…

The reporter was unexpectedly stung by a depressing sense of fatalism. All of the participants—the shoppers and the partiers—appeared trapped to him. Their choreographed routine seemed so inculcated by the town and the mountains that, even had they escaped from this monotony to the cities, they would have had to return, for they could never fit in anywhere else. Burdened with this melancholy, he left the lights and walked into the deeper darkness of the residential area, where dim forms could be sensed on the porches and occasional lights filtered through curtains in front windows. He walked until the sidewalk disappeared and then turned around; on the journey back, someone across the unlit street murmured ‘hello’. Surprised, he nodded in return. The Piggly Wiggly parking lot was empty when he passed it again.

Reviews for THE TEMPORAL: STORIES IN TIME AND RHYME

“Okay, what did I just read? That was freakin’ AWESOME! I’m so glad I gave this book a shot. There are short stories that read like a surreal stream of consciousness, and the poems have great insight and emotion. A great book - give it a chance even if it’s not your typical reading fare.” ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

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“Simply brilliant! This collection of short stories and poems is unlike anything I’ve read - dark and deep with a strong literary, almost surreal twist. The prose is powerful … and frighteningly observant and blunt at other times. I loved “Pittman Forge.” Professionally edited and presented as well.” ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

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"Wow! I am impressed and amazed by this book. In shorter stories and poetry, word choice is EVERYTHING and these authors deliver. These pieces all come across as strong, haunting, inspiring, and vivid. There is such a wide mix of topics and genres to give it such a big feel and gives more depth. I am so glad I read this, a reader’s treat, suitable for older teens and adults." ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Sam Ryan Goodreads; Barnes & Noble; Indie Book Reviewers

"I very much enjoyed the variety of genres, topics, and narrative voices and skillful literary prose of each of the three authors. The poems and stories were all very interesting, and unique in their own right. I liked how each of them deliver a strong emotional punch and ask the deeper questions – forcing us to look through a different filter for a while. This is an eclectic mix, but it works together well, and feels very literary, surreal, and outside the box. It’s a fast read and very different from anything else I’ve read." ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Claire Middleton Goodreads; Barnes & Noble; Indie Book Reviewers

"Stories in Time and Rhyme is a multi-genre collaboration of stories and poems by David W. Brooks, Bungalow Stokes, and Asher Roth. To say I’ve never read a book like this is an understatement! It is an addicting, intoxicating read that holds no punches and goes straight for the gut and messes with your mind, but in a really cool way. The story “Learning to Swim” was one of the weirdest/coolest I’ve ever read, and I like how ‘out there’ the author thinks. I read the whole book in a few hours, and wished there was more when it was over. I found the writing quality to be superb from each author, and I was truly impressed with the way they managed to put so many events and emotions and experiences in such a short amount of space. Highly recommend." ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

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